Place of the topic sentence
Place of the topic sentence
Example 1:
Another benefit of social media is that it is the voice of the weak and oppressed. (Topic sentence) Since the spirit of social media is equality and freedom of expression without any discrimination, incidents of tyranny are posted on social media that go viral. Thus the tyrants cannot escape the law. For example, when Shahzeb Khan was killed ruthlessly, the incident was reported on social media, the authorities had to take immediate action to arrest the accused. At the same time, the apex court also took notice of the incident and pursued the case. As a result, the criminal could not escape in spite of his wealth and power and justice was done. Salahuddin Custodial Murder, George Floyd’s death and many other oppressions became the voice of the people because of social media and the culprits were punished for their crimes. Thus, social media has become a loud voice of a common man.
Note: The topic sentence is in the beginning.
Example 2:
Since the spirit of social media is equality and freedom of expression without any discrimination, incidents of tyranny are posted on social media that go viral. Thus the tyrants cannot escape the law. For example, when Shahzeb Khan was killed ruthlessly, the incident was reported on social media, the authorities had to take immediate action to arrest the accused. At the same time, the apex court also took notice of the incident and pursued the case. As a result, the criminal could not escape in spite of his wealth and power and justice was done. Salahuddin Custodial Murder, George Floyd’s death and many other oppressions became the voice of the people because of social media and the culprits were punished for their crimes. Thus, social media has become a loud voice of a common man.
Note: The topic is revealed at the end of the passage.
Example 3:
Since the spirit of social media is equality and freedom of expression without any discrimination, incidents of tyranny are posted on social media that go viral. Thus the tyrants cannot escape the law. Social media has become the voice of the week and oppressed. For example, when Shahzeb Khan was killed ruthlessly, the incident was reported on social media, the authorities had to take immediate action to arrest the accused. At the same time, the apex court also took notice of the incident and pursued the case. As a result, the criminal could not escape in spite of his wealth and power and justice was done. Salahuddin Custodial Murder, George Floyd’s death and many other oppressions became the voice of the people because of social media and the culprits were punished for their crimes.
Note: The topic sentence is somewhere in the middle of the passage.
Example 4:
Since the spirit of social media is equality and freedom of expression without any discrimination, incidents of tyranny are posted on social media that go viral. Thus the tyrants cannot escape the law. For example, when Shahzeb Khan was killed ruthlessly, the incident was reported on social media, the authorities had to take immediate action to arrest the accused. At the same time, the apex court also took notice of the incident and pursued the case. As a result, the criminal could not escape in spite of his wealth and power and justice was done. Salahuddin Custodial Murder, George Floyd’s death and many other oppressions became the voice of the people because of social media and the culprits were punished for their crimes.
Note: The topic is implicit. Do not write in this manner in your essay.
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Fine sir, very helpful lecture.